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Close your eyes on the otherside
I'll help you lift your dreams TONIGHT
My only will is strong inside
Take my hand WE'LL SHARE the ride

Bloody streams enclose my hand
I let my head fall and descend
A DECENT DEATH is what I pretend
I don't expect you to comprehend

Bury me softly in the ground
Where busy worms sleep all around
STILL you and me forever bound
Your voice is the only sound

Following your distant calls
I'M dancing with RAGING souls
I wander down the empty halls
Fleeing through the corridoors

I heat the sun with candlelight
My fate depends on it tonight
I WANT to walk into the light
But I am referred to the night

To my REVENGE I'M still a SLAVE
TO ACCOMPLISH I must be brave
I take this lesson to THE GRAVE
To remember what I save

MY SALVATION IS far away
But I won't run away today
Your DREADFUL secret gives away
I'LL stay long enough to REPAY
:iconilimbo:
Just a little song I hum to myself in my vengeful hours. None too serious. Teehee.



After some thought I decided it shall humbly mingle within the atmosphere of this peculiar gem, Badirfilay [link] (if they too approve). I really love the dark playfulness of their tale and the people "dead or(/and :D) alive" in it. I just wish I knew more of the story!
I'm very very happy to have found this still growing, shaping comic oozing such incredible possibilities. A comic that I can like so much. Go Badirfilay!

I love to think up and write stories too (although the drawing part has proved to be a bigger challenge for me than I can yet handle... grroah! I seem to need all the time in the world.) This piece too has originally emanated from the nape of a character of mine, the first and only one for whom I've yet failed to find a proper name. That in itself encourages me to let this one fly and maybe find that name on it's own.

So up! up! and away! I hope you'll enjoy!
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*Oh-Ninona May 2, 2011  Professional Digital Artist
Cool! So full of strenght!
If you keep reading Badirfilay, you'll find that Revenge is an important word there... specially for a certain character...

Thanks again for the support!
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:iconilimbo:
Thank you very much for featuring it.
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:iconoh-ninona:
*Oh-Ninona May 2, 2011  Professional Digital Artist
No problem!
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:iconilimbo:
Certain character? Let me Vguess... :D No doubt I'll keep reading it. Such a story almost crawls off the screen. I can almost see it... I can definitely smell it's passion. :D I love it!
Also, thank you for your kind support. Rereading my piece in this new concept that was inspired by your work, that it might as well dwell inbetween me and something somewhere I never knew when I was creating it, it looks back at me finally showing signs of life. All the while this one creation of mine was plain undead without ever having lived. Oh, the beauty of archetypes! :D
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*Oh-Ninona May 2, 2011  Professional Digital Artist
You'll...Vsee :XD:
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!Sonic-Argent-Fan Dec 30, 2009  Student Traditional Artist
I really love this.
I wish I knew the beat to it. XD
I like the capitalisation of certain words, it adds that 'anger' feeling to it.
:)
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:iconilimbo:
Think furter in them capitals! That isn't where it ends. But no more hints!
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:iconsonic-argent-fan:
!Sonic-Argent-Fan Dec 30, 2009  Student Traditional Artist
In the title...the capitals form the word...
PREUDEDEVA??
XD
Yep, Now I'll end up trying everything I can think of until I find something.
:D
Which might take a while!
XD
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:iconilimbo:
You're on the trail. Follow it : )
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